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by barbara2
Thu 31. Aug 2017, 11:45
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

And now 38, 42, 43, 44 and 45 are all PL OK.

Best,

Barbara
by barbara2
Sun 27. Aug 2017, 14:27
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Oh, narcissus again and now my conscience is a smouldering hell (for sniggering).

But Sections 33, 34 and 37 are PL OK.

Best,

Barbara
by barbara2
Thu 24. Aug 2017, 13:55
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

You have no idea. I've had more outtakes with this project than I normally do for poetry. Normal verse read incorrectly sounds or feels wrong immediately at least some of the time, but even when this is word perfect it sounds and feels completely off. So true. To intermittently hear was I wormily t...
by barbara2
Wed 23. Aug 2017, 12:42
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Sections 21, 22 and 23 are PL OK.

I think the habit of inverting subject and predicate got the better of our author's grammar at one stage but have I the courage to go back and check? No, I do not.

Best,

Barbara
by barbara2
Tue 22. Aug 2017, 11:48
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

She is indeed shocking. I've learned that I'll be away for most of next month, so I'll address any PL notes when I'm back. If you'd like a postcard, please feel free to PM me your address. It's the least I can do after spamming you with this appalling verse. Erin Lucky Erin. Have a lovely break fro...
by barbara2
Tue 22. Aug 2017, 11:44
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

In which we learn, with no discernible irony, that McKittrick Ros's favourite flower was the narcissus. https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/HzcO7dTj/fumesofformation_18_ros.mp3 (0.56) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/HzcO7dTj/fumesofformation_37_ros.mp3 (2.37) Narcissusism run wild. Sectio...
by barbara2
Sat 19. Aug 2017, 13:33
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

OK. Sections 4, 8, 12 and 14 are all PL OK.

Listening to Section 8 (female garments de nos jours) I was shocked. Shocked.

Best,

Barbara
by barbara2
Mon 7. Aug 2017, 03:53
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Newgatenovelist wrote:
Wed 2. Aug 2017, 22:45
I'm on a roll, but I think I've had all the McKittrick Ros I can possibly stomach for a little while.

I'm taking small bites myself. Sections 2 and 11 are PL OK. I think Section 11 has been my favorite so far - laugh out loud at times.

Best,

Barbara
by barbara2
Thu 20. Jul 2017, 12:37
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: ~solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Five to start the week: https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/b1pb-VO0/fumesofformation_30_ros.mp3 (0.33) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/b1pb-VO0/fumesofformation_31_ros.mp3 (0.55) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/b1pb-VO0/fumesofformation_32_ros.mp3 (0.49) https://upload.legamus.eu/...
by barbara2
Wed 12. Jul 2017, 08:02
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Three this week: https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/OfYLTKFb/fumesofformation_25_ros.mp3 (2.11) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/OfYLTKFb/fumesofformation_28_ros.mp3 (0.31) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/OfYLTKFb/fumesofformation_29_ros.mp3 (0.39) Well, what can I say? McKittrick ...
by barbara2
Fri 7. Jul 2017, 12:20
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

It's been a slow few days on the McKittrick Ros front, but here goes: https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/OIEfmSDd/fumesofformation_07_ros.mp3 (2.54) https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/OIEfmSDd/fumesofformation_20_ros.mp3 (1.01) That wasn't so bad. You make her sound better than she is. Sect...
by barbara2
Thu 15. Jun 2017, 14:24
Forum: Completed Projects
Topic: COMPLETE[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok
Replies: 57
Views: 10726

Re: ~solo[ENG]Fumes of Formation-Amanda McKittrick Ros-hok

Hello Legamus! I hope my first post succeeds. I have offered to DPL Erin's readings of the Amanda McKittrick Ros oeuvre. I am hoping that these poems will rival in hopelessness those of the celebrated William MacGonagall*. Best, Barbara *Beautiful Railway Bridge of the Silv’ry Tay! Alas! I am very s...