Again, I've removed the repeat and the 'read by'.rapunzelina wrote:In Section 4, there is a repetition around 16:34 to 16:58 of
"That's good," said Bowker. He switched off the cabin light and stepped out on to the deck. "I aim to take particular care of you, sir. Saw your home town on the sailing list. I'm an old Boston man myself."
Apart from that, Section 4 is OK. (and apart from the fact that it starts as Section 4 and ends as Chapter 4 )
I tried to do a quick fix on the section/chapter mix up, but my cunning plan failed, so I'm going to leave those for now