Hi Lynette,
I've uploaded The Hotel Child tonight here for PL https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3
36 stories left to read
[eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
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Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Thanks,
Adrian
Adrian
Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Hello there 
Sections 34 and 73, "One Trip Abroad," is PL OK for both parts 1 and 2.

PL Note: Section 35, "A Hotel Child," is very nice, except there is about a ten-second silence between the intro and the story.
Spot-work on some of the divided stories:
PL Note: Section 2, "Dice, Brass Knuckles, & Guitar, part 1" - at 0:23, it seems there should be a "Part 1" after the chapter name, and the existing intro sounds really smushed into the beginning of the actual story. Similarly, the ending sounds smushed into the end of the story at 23:54.
Section 74, "Dice, brass Knuckles, & Guitar, part 2" is PL OK
PL Note: Section 11, "Jacob's Ladder, part 1" - is still the full Jacob's Ladder story.
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For what it's worth as a listener, if they fit in the time constraint, it's much better with these short stories to have them whole. I wasn't sure why the need arose to divide them, though, so perhaps I missed something operational.
It seems to me that someone who initially set this up as a group project divided long stories for unknown readers, not knowing if they would fit in the time, and perhaps also anticipating having difficulty getting people to volunteer for the long ones in one shot.
Maybe it's a pain, but will it be nicer to revert to the original whole-story files? Whatever you prefer, Adrian, I'm happy to do the spot-PL stuff. I'll be back for the others on another session. This snowstorm is starting up a migraine for me.

Sections 34 and 73, "One Trip Abroad," is PL OK for both parts 1 and 2.


PL Note: Section 35, "A Hotel Child," is very nice, except there is about a ten-second silence between the intro and the story.
Spot-work on some of the divided stories:
PL Note: Section 2, "Dice, Brass Knuckles, & Guitar, part 1" - at 0:23, it seems there should be a "Part 1" after the chapter name, and the existing intro sounds really smushed into the beginning of the actual story. Similarly, the ending sounds smushed into the end of the story at 23:54.
Section 74, "Dice, brass Knuckles, & Guitar, part 2" is PL OK

PL Note: Section 11, "Jacob's Ladder, part 1" - is still the full Jacob's Ladder story.
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For what it's worth as a listener, if they fit in the time constraint, it's much better with these short stories to have them whole. I wasn't sure why the need arose to divide them, though, so perhaps I missed something operational.
It seems to me that someone who initially set this up as a group project divided long stories for unknown readers, not knowing if they would fit in the time, and perhaps also anticipating having difficulty getting people to volunteer for the long ones in one shot.
Maybe it's a pain, but will it be nicer to revert to the original whole-story files? Whatever you prefer, Adrian, I'm happy to do the spot-PL stuff. I'll be back for the others on another session. This snowstorm is starting up a migraine for me.

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Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
I prefer the whole stories myself. Is that okay with you Viktor if we revert to whole stories apart from the one that was very long?Viktor wrote: Fri 24. Jan 2025, 01:27 Hello Adrian,
I assume these Pat Hobby stories are OK from a copyright point of view (that is, the only author is Fitzgerald). I don't see any information to the contrary. Then it's completely up to you! If you want to read them, I can do the word counts.
Thanks,
Adrian
Adrian
Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Cool. I've pulled all the spot-PLs to double-check when I have a longer moment.
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Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Lynette, sorry I forgot to say I have done all that in an email, but you've picked it up anyway. Thanks so much for your applicationLCaulkins wrote: Thu 20. Feb 2025, 16:44 Cool. I've pulled all the spot-PLs to double-check when I have a longer moment.
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Adrian
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Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Hi Lynette,
I've uploaded Babylon Revisited https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3
and A New Leaf https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3 for PL
35 stories left to PL, 34 stories left to read
I've uploaded Babylon Revisited https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3
and A New Leaf https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3 for PL
35 stories left to PL, 34 stories left to read

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Adrian
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Re: [eng/SOLO] Short Stories I by F. Scott Fitzgerald - vik
Lynette,
I have uploaded story Emotional Bankruptcy for PL https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3
36 stories left to PL, 33 stories left to read
I have uploaded story Emotional Bankruptcy for PL https://upload.legamus.eu/simple/files/ ... gerald.mp3
36 stories left to PL, 33 stories left to read

Thanks,
Adrian
Adrian